There was something very odd about the light.
The dual shadows should have clued me in: one stretched out in front of me — and one behind. I looked up into the mists that surrounded me, to see that there were not one but two suns in the sky; one directly behind me, and another directly ahead, in line with the path I trod towards the ancient stone circle I’d set out to visit today.
Somewhat panicked, I halted in my tracks. The sun behind seemed normal; but the one ahead did not.
It danced.
As I watched, transfixed, it grew brighter, and brighter still. I raised a hand to shield my eyes, and thought to turn and run — but I was mesmerised by this dancing light as it approached, and paused, and slowly settled down, down, into the centre of the circle of stones ahead.
And then the light blinked out. As my eyes adjusted, I could see ahead of me, in the centre of the stones, a pyramid shape.
One side of the pyramid pivoted from the main structure and slowly came down to touch the ground. At the top of the ramp, a figure appeared.
It beckoned.
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Prompt: Sue Vincent’s Thursday Photo Prompt — Dance
Ooh! Who? What do they want? Where are they from? Excellent tale, Pendantry, but I now want more…! 🙂
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“Always leave them wanting more”, that’s what I’m told. And: “End on a high note!” (that’s what my brother says). Glad you liked it!
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Wonderful description… and a nice cliffhanger ;)
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Thank you!
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Arrival – #writephoto
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:)
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Great spin on that photo.
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Thank you for saying so! :)
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You’re welcome
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Wonderful piece of writing Colin… would make a great opening chapter of a scifi book.. :-)
Have a great weekend.. :-)
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Thanks, Sue! Tom (above) also suggested that this needs more. I’ll put my thinking cap on and see if I can come up with something!
Hope you’re enjoying your weekend, too :)
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:-) 👍
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Intriguing. Is it the alien invasion or is someone playing a prank? Maybe CIA recruitment.
Well done on sucking us in.
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Oh you created a delightful sense of mystery, well done.
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Thank you for saying so!
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Wait….you left us hanging! :) Awesome and mysterious. Sequel? :)
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Welcome to Wibble, Lisa! And thank you for your comments. Sorry to leave you hanging, my intent was to surprise you :) I have no sequel planned, but who knows what the future holds?
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LOL! Keeping people hanging is one of the best ways to keep your audience wanting more. Great job there on this one. :)
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